The majority of my focus group (18/20) said that they liked the masthead font, but 14/20 said I should make it a different colour. I'm therefore going to use this font in my final construction and change the colour based on the photo I take. Everyone in my focus group said it would look more conventional to have a price above the bar code, and some said I should ensure that the photo I take has a darker background so that the text is clearer. Some said that it would look more conventional to have more text on the page.
Contents Page
All of the group agreed with me that the layout was untidy and therefore not professional looking and conventional for regional magazine contents pages. 17/20 said I should try and link the contents page design with the front cover to have better brand consistency, for example by having a photograph of the same model or having a similar colour scheme. 15/20 people said that I could have similar sized images to improve the layout.
17/20 people in the group said that I should make sure the photo I take is better quality than this one, but the majority of people liked the layout. 8/20 people said I should make the ellipses more interesting, for example by giving it a folded corner or a glossy effect. People also said that I should ensure that the text and lines are lined up properly.
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